Audience Feedback!
After I had finished my final drafts on my pages I asked two teenaged girls close to the age of my target audience for feedback, this is what they said:
Sarah: "I really like the front cover, I think it’s
cool because the background is pink which is different to other magazines and
the model on the front is bright and stands out, it would definitely catch my
eye on a store shelf. The layout looks professional, like a well-known magazine
that you see in shops! I like how the contents page is spread out it allows the
writing to be easily readable this makes it easy to find page numbers and
features quickly. However, you could use more images or something to fill out
the space a little bit more. I love the
main picture for the double page spread, her pose makes her approachable, the
top of the page where it says ‘Meet….Emily Pope’ seems to be a bit empty so
that could have a better use of space but overall the pages are not too
cluttered and easy to read, which is good.”
Jenna: "The front cover stands out because there are a
lot of bright colours which grab your attention straight away. The articles
shown on the cover is a quick way to grab readers so it was a good idea to put
these on the cover where people can see it first before opening the magazine. I
also like how these is a smaller picture of the front cover model on the
contents page as well because it keeps consistency from the front cover to the
contents page. I like the double page spread as it the big picture really catch
your eye right away and the quote pulls you into read the rest of the
interview. The text is easy to read and the two colours used help the reader to
know which part is the question and which part is the answer."
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