Re-drafting of my pages!

In my A2 year I decided to redraft my pages and resubmit them here is the changes to pages: 

AS pages: 

A2 pages: 

Another draft of my DPS!

After getting some feedback from my teacher I redrafted my Double Page Spread, here is my updated version!

Draft number 2 of my cover!

 

In this draft I have changed the bottom tagline and changed some of the taglines. I will look for some audience feed back as to what I can change to make it better. 

Another draft of my Cover!

Here is another draft of my Pop Magazine Cover, this could potentially be my final draft! There are a few things which I want to just tweak and depending on whether they look better then I will upload my FINAL DRAFT!

Font research!

I have started work on my cover and started with the fonts which could be possibilities. I am currently using DaFont.com for ideas as to which type of font I want for the design of my Pop Magazine Cover.

By researching the different fonts available I have got an idea of the type of font that I want to use, the font which I envisage for my Cover is to be big and slightly rounded but not to an extent where it looks childish, but at the same time I want to keep with the Pop Genre so it'll need to be fun and girly and catch the audiences eye.


As part of my research for what font to use and what different fonts are possible, I started with the History of Typography as seen in the video below...



From this video, I have learnt a lot about the different types of available and how they came about and what significance they have. It was very useful as part of my research.

The research into typography has shown me how important fonts are in creating a successful brand name as if used correctly it quickly becomes well known and recognized as being associated with a specific brand. This is what I hope to create through choosing a good font for my cover, a font which is unique but at the same easy to read and easily recognizable. 

Re-drafting of my cover!

I have begun the drafting process of my front cover, I have changed the photo and started to again look at pop magasins for inspirations and to make sure that I have all the genre conventions, here is a preview of my draft process.

 

 

 

Audience feedback on Cover!

Potential Cover Photos

So, since I have decided to redraft my front cover I needed a new cover photo I previously posted my final four options but after asking around for some audience feedback the majority vote for the photo below therefore this will be the photo I will be using for my new cover!

 

FINAL OPTIONS: for my cover!!!

I have narrowed it down to four final options for my cover but I will ask for audience feedback as to which one I shall use for the cover.

Here is my final selection and I am going to ask my audience which ones they prefer and think are most likely to fulfil the genre conventions of a pop magazine.

3rd Draft of my Double Page Spread for my music magazine!

3rd draft of my Double Page Spread!

This is my 3rd and potentially final draft for my double page spread, I have centred some of the off centre parts of the page and addited a few additional deatails to it. feel free to add any comments for improvements.

3rd Draft of my cover for my music magazine

This is my 3rd and potentially final draft of my music magazine cover! I changed the sticker and moved some of the coverlines. I have tried to keep it in the girly theme and used a pink background to highlight this also to make the model stand out as the white was close with her skin tone as she is quite pale so this way she stands out more and captures the readers attention right from the beginning.

3rd Draft of my Contents Page for my Music Magazine

This is the 3rd and potentially final draft of my contents page for my music magazine.I have made lots of changes throught the construction of this page and used the layout from my school magazine as a starting layout, it made it easier this way and helped me creat the final product.

2nd draft of the Contents Page for my Music Magazine

This is the second draft for my contents page for my music magazine. The layout is simple this makes it easy to reads which is key for the target audience, feel free to leave any comments below for improvements :)

2nd Draft of my Double Page Spread for my Music Magazine

This is the second draft of my music magazine double page spread I edited the main picture and changed the background to make it easier to read the writing, please feel free to leave and comments or suggestions forhow i can improive it :)

1st Draft of my double page spread for my music magazine!

this is the first draft of my contents page its not finished yet, I need to add more for the text and edit it some more but ive kept in with the girly theme of the magazine in the colours and included an A4 picture of the main artist.

My first draft of my music magazine Contents Page!

 

 

This is the first draft of my music magazine's content page, is there anything I could improve on and what is it that you like? And what can I improve further?

Contents Page 1st Draft

 

This is my first draft, I need to add some pictures please comment on what you like and think I can improve on thank you!!!!

 

2nd Draft of my Music Magazine Cover

2nd Draft:

 

 

 

This is the second drft of my music magazine cover, I changed the sticker of the '12 FREE POSTERS' to make it more like a music magazine and moved the coverlines any suggestions on how it can be improved further?

1st Draft of my Music Magazine Cover

1st Draft:

 

 

Here is the first draft of my music magazine, I still need to do some work on the editing and Ineed to arrange and add the coverlines still.